Thank you for your advices, maybe my language is not good enough to write as what you have said, also I could use (Check Spelling), but it does not matter in which language you are writing, the big issue is what you believe, and to think about what you write. If you think that you can push people in your way, people can recognize their way, they don't like to being pushed, also if you believe in yourself that you have good analysis I do not think so, you are just trying to show your knowledge, and how you can follow the other people's steps, that is it. Your job is only to rewrite what other people write; I didn't see anything from yourself, so do not be mad, it is not good for your thinking to write for us terrible things.
Note: my computer does not support my language which is Arabic. I am sure people who give up writing not because yours is very strong or true but it seemed so ugly.
Good luck with your bad thinking, and wait for another one to repeat what he will say, but in a different way.